Writing and Reading

      Lewis Hine, at a certain point in his career, began to refer to himself as an “interpretive photographer” and not a social photographer as he’d been previously termed. What drew Brubacher to Hine’s work was one particular aspect of many of Hine’s photographs: the extremely limited depth of field. 14 In photographs with deep depth of field, the entire image appears sharp. With shallow depth of field, as in Hine’s pictures, only a narrow plane appears unblurred. And unlike some photographers making use of this technique to blur out the background, Hine repeatedly uses it in a way that also blurs the foreground. Brubacher wanted to explore how much of the shallow focus was prescribed by circumstance and how much was an aesthetic decision on the part of Hine.
At this point, the writer is considering adding the following sentence.
Should the writer make this addition here?